Newsford South: Difference between revisions

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'''''Revolts'''''

The King of Corinia, Luis III, had taken back the peasant era and had over 100,000 starved to death in prison camps in the first month because of the Anti-War protests. Families were separated. Children were left with no parents. It was no joke. By 1830, five million people had died. In his speech he said, “Tve sledkno vete wez sharv twof ~~dequo~~ [Translated, Those who are lazy will starve to death.] On the 5 February, 1860, the citizens started to revolt against the Corianians. Hill Ocean Birch Bay and Newgate had supplied it with ammo and guns. It had started the Second Independence War.

The King of Corinia, Luis III, had taken back the peasant era and had over 100,000 starved to death in prison camps in the first month because of the Anti-War protests. Families were separated. Children were left with no parents. It was no joke. By 1830, five million people had died. In his speech he said, “Tve sledkno vete wez sharv twof dequo” [Translated: Those who are lazy will starve to death.] On the 5 February, 1860, the citizens started to revolt against the Corianians. Hill Ocean Birch Bay and Newgate had supplied it with ammo and guns. It had started the Second Independence War.

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'''''Independency'''''

Finally, after nearly 100 years of ruling under the evil ~~king~~ of Corinia, it had fallen by the revolts and the Second Independence War. Newsford South was recreated on the 2 October 1865. The old citizens of Newsford South were coming back. A monarchy was established. The King selected was named Rex Ctzara. Now it just had to strengthen its economy. It started port trade and the most popular import and exports were pork. It had also sold the Newlot Island for 188b to Northlands. By this time, its economy had risen. They had also opened a airport and a airline named "Kingston Air". Newtch and Neudollar (its currency) had started to be popular. By 1870, the whole population of Newsford South had learnt the Newtch and English Language.

Finally, after nearly 100 years of ruling under the evil kings of Corinia, it had fallen by the revolts and the Second Independence War. Newsford South was recreated on the 2 October 1865. The old citizens of Newsford South were coming back. A monarchy was established. The King selected was named Rex Ctzara. Now it just had to strengthen its economy. It started port trade and the most popular import and exports were pork. It had also sold the Newlot Island for 188b to Northlands. By this time, its economy had risen. They had also opened a airport and a airline named "Kingston Air". Newtch and Neudollar (its currency) had started to be popular. By 1870, the whole population of Newsford South had learnt the Newtch and English Language.

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 '''''Revolts'''''
-The King of Corinia, Luis III, had taken back the peasant era and had over 100,000 starved to death in prison camps in the first month because of the Anti-War protests. Families were separated. Children were left with no parents. It was no joke. By 1830, five million people had died. In his speech he said, “Tve sledkno vete wez sharv twof dequo [Translated, Those who are lazy will starve to death.] On the 5 February, 1860, the citizens started to revolt against the Corianians. Hill Ocean Birch Bay and Newgate had supplied it with ammo and guns. It had started the Second Independence War.
+The King of Corinia, Luis III, had taken back the peasant era and had over 100,000 starved to death in prison camps in the first month because of the Anti-War protests. Families were separated. Children were left with no parents. It was no joke. By 1830, five million people had died. In his speech he said, “Tve sledkno vete wez sharv twof dequo” [Translated: Those who are lazy will starve to death.] On the 5 February, 1860, the citizens started to revolt against the Corianians. Hill Ocean Birch Bay and Newgate had supplied it with ammo and guns. It had started the Second Independence War.
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 '''''Independency'''''
-Finally, after nearly 100 years of ruling under the evil king of Corinia, it had fallen by the revolts and the Second Independence War. Newsford South was recreated on the 2 October 1865. The old citizens of Newsford South were coming back. A monarchy was established. The King selected was named Rex Ctzara. Now it just had to strengthen its economy. It started port trade and the most popular import and exports were pork. It had also sold the Newlot Island for 188b to Northlands. By this time, its economy had risen. They had also opened a airport and a airline named "Kingston Air". Newtch and Neudollar (its currency) had started to be popular. By 1870, the whole population of Newsford South had learnt the Newtch and English Language.
+Finally, after nearly 100 years of ruling under the evil kings of Corinia, it had fallen by the revolts and the Second Independence War. Newsford South was recreated on the 2 October 1865. The old citizens of Newsford South were coming back. A monarchy was established. The King selected was named Rex Ctzara. Now it just had to strengthen its economy. It started port trade and the most popular import and exports were pork. It had also sold the Newlot Island for 188b to Northlands. By this time, its economy had risen. They had also opened a airport and a airline named "Kingston Air". Newtch and Neudollar (its currency) had started to be popular. By 1870, the whole population of Newsford South had learnt the Newtch and English Language.