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==National Anthem==

Mr Lucas Dulwich was the composer of the Newsford South National Anthem, "Advanter Neuford Soder". Born in the ~~Province~~ of

Mr Lucas Dulwich was the composer of the Newsford South National Anthem, "Advanter Neuford Soder". Born on 1906, in the province of Perclan, he had learnt music and developed a passion for it at a young age. He moved to West Kingston to pursue music. Mr Lucas worked in a film company as a music composer. The government was impressed with Mr Lucas so he was asked to compose a piece of music for the opening of West Kingston Centraal in 1929. He wrote about Newsford South and for it to prosper. The government was very happy with the song and decided to make it the national anthem. To honour Mr Lucas, a road and a station was renamed to Dulwich Street in 1946.

'''''Advanter Neuford Soder'''''

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'''''[Advance with greatness]'''''

'''''Mayt yous contounous prospero'''''

'''''Mayt yous contounous tou prospero'''''

'''''[May you continue to prosper]'''''

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'''''Revolts'''''

The King of Corinia, Luis III, had made the country fascist and had over 100,000 starved to death in prison camps in the first month because of the Anti-War protests. Families were separated. Children were left with no parents. By 1830, five million people had died. In his speech he said in Corian, “Tve sledkno vete wez ore protasto againsta men sharv twof dequo” [Translated to English: Those who are lazy or protest against me will starve to death!] On the 5 February, ~~1860~~, the citizens started to revolt against the Corianians. Hill Ocean Birch Bay and Newgate had supplied Newsford South with ammo and guns. It had started the Second Independence War.

The King of Corinia, Luis III, had made the country fascist and had over 100,000 starved to death in prison camps in the first month because of the Anti-War protests. Families were separated. Children were left with no parents. By 1830, five million people had died. In his speech he said in Corian, “Tve sledkno vete wez ore protasto againsta men sharv twof dequo” [Translated to English: Those who are lazy or protest against me will starve to death!] On the 5 February, 1864, the citizens started to revolt against the Corianians. Hill Ocean Birch Bay and Newgate had supplied Newsford South with ammo and guns. It had started the Second Independence War.

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'''''Independency'''''

Finally, after nearly 100 years of ruling under the evil king of Corinia, it had fallen by the revolts and the Second Independence War. Newsford South was recreated on the 2 October 1865. The Capital was changed from Sodermunn to Kingston. The old citizens of Newsford South were coming back. A monarchy was established. The King selected was named Rex Luis Fortmunn. Now it just had to strengthen its economy. It started port trade and the most popular import and exports were food. It had also sold the Newslot Island (Neulotte Islando) for 188b to Northlands. By this time, its economy had risen. They had also opened a ~~airport and a airline named "Kingston Air"~~. Newtch (the language) and Neudollar (its currency) had started to be popular. By 1870, the whole population of Newsford South had learnt the Newtch and English Language.\

Finally, after nearly 100 years of ruling under the evil king of Corinia, it had fallen by the revolts and the Second Independence War. Newsford South was recreated on the 2 October 1865. The Capital was changed from Sodermunn to Kingston. The old citizens of Newsford South were coming back. A monarchy was established. The King selected was named Rex Luis Fortmunn. Now it just had to strengthen its economy. It started port trade and the most popular import and exports were food. It had also sold the Newslot Island (Neulotte Islando) for 188b to Northlands. By this time, its economy had risen. They had also opened a port. Newtch (the language) and Neudollar (its currency) had started to be popular. By 1870, the whole population of Newsford South had learnt the Newtch and English Language.

'''''National Day'''''

Newsford South's National Day was on 2 October, 1866. It marked the day that Newtish fought against Corinia. It was very important to the Newtish, as the hardships on them finally ended. There was a big celebration in the Capital at the Kingston Beach. Rex Luis, who had been Newsford South's president in 1865, arrived at about 9a.m. The army marched from Kingston Beach towards East End.

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 ==National Anthem==
-Mr Lucas Dulwich was the composer of the Newsford South National Anthem, "Advanter Neuford Soder". Born in the Province of
+Mr Lucas Dulwich was the composer of the Newsford South National Anthem, "Advanter Neuford Soder". Born on 1906, in the province of Perclan, he had learnt music and developed a passion for it at a young age. He moved to West Kingston to pursue music. Mr Lucas worked in a film company as a music composer. The government was impressed with Mr Lucas so he was asked to compose a piece of music for the opening of West Kingston Centraal in 1929. He wrote about Newsford South and for it to prosper. The government was very happy with the song and decided to make it the national anthem. To honour Mr Lucas, a road and a station was renamed to Dulwich Street in 1946.
 '''''Advanter Neuford Soder'''''
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 '''''[Advance with greatness]'''''
-'''''Mayt yous contounous prospero'''''
+'''''Mayt yous contounous tou prospero'''''
 '''''[May you continue to prosper]'''''
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 '''''Revolts'''''
-The King of Corinia, Luis III, had made the country fascist and had over 100,000 starved to death in prison camps in the first month because of the Anti-War protests. Families were separated. Children were left with no parents. By 1830, five million people had died. In his speech he said in Corian, “Tve sledkno vete wez ore protasto againsta men sharv twof dequo” [Translated to English: Those who are lazy or protest against me will starve to death!] On the 5 February, 1860, the citizens started to revolt against the Corianians. Hill Ocean Birch Bay and Newgate had supplied Newsford South with ammo and guns. It had started the Second Independence War.
+The King of Corinia, Luis III, had made the country fascist and had over 100,000 starved to death in prison camps in the first month because of the Anti-War protests. Families were separated. Children were left with no parents. By 1830, five million people had died. In his speech he said in Corian, “Tve sledkno vete wez ore protasto againsta men sharv twof dequo” [Translated to English: Those who are lazy or protest against me will starve to death!] On the 5 February, 1864, the citizens started to revolt against the Corianians. Hill Ocean Birch Bay and Newgate had supplied Newsford South with ammo and guns. It had started the Second Independence War.
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 '''''Independency'''''
-Finally, after nearly 100 years of ruling under the evil king of Corinia, it had fallen by the revolts and the Second Independence War. Newsford South was recreated on the 2 October 1865. The Capital was changed from Sodermunn to Kingston. The old citizens of Newsford South were coming back. A monarchy was established. The King selected was named Rex Luis Fortmunn. Now it just had to strengthen its economy. It started port trade and the most popular import and exports were food. It had also sold the Newslot Island (Neulotte Islando) for 188b to Northlands. By this time, its economy had risen. They had also opened a airport and a airline named "Kingston Air". Newtch (the language) and Neudollar (its currency) had started to be popular. By 1870, the whole population of Newsford South had learnt the Newtch and English Language.\
+Finally, after nearly 100 years of ruling under the evil king of Corinia, it had fallen by the revolts and the Second Independence War. Newsford South was recreated on the 2 October 1865. The Capital was changed from Sodermunn to Kingston. The old citizens of Newsford South were coming back. A monarchy was established. The King selected was named Rex Luis Fortmunn. Now it just had to strengthen its economy. It started port trade and the most popular import and exports were food. It had also sold the Newslot Island (Neulotte Islando) for 188b to Northlands. By this time, its economy had risen. They had also opened a port. Newtch (the language) and Neudollar (its currency) had started to be popular. By 1870, the whole population of Newsford South had learnt the Newtch and English Language.
+'''''National Day'''''
+Newsford South's National Day was on 2 October, 1866. It marked the day that Newtish fought against Corinia. It was very important to the Newtish, as the hardships on them finally ended. There was a big celebration in the Capital at the Kingston Beach. Rex Luis, who had been Newsford South's president in 1865, arrived at about 9a.m. The army marched from Kingston Beach towards East End.